《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句(赏析11篇)
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《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句1
俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1.审题不清
如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误：my father and my mother is all teacher。
正：my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。
误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。
正：the apples are 'll take some。
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into example,my friend in high school。
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的'不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。
例 one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误：when i get to the station the train leave。
正：when i got to the station the train had left。
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句2
Next year,I will do many going to get good grades .Because in this year,I Was not get good going to play soccer ball. because I think that can make me healthly.
Im going to eat more vegetables and Im going to learn a new also going to visit my grandparents and will go to a summer its going to help my parents to clean the will buy some gifts for my think that can make them next year ,Im going to make my parents cook for them.
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句3
My mother looks has long is a teacher and she is teaching English in a middle school.
She is very kind and likes her students.
Her lessons are very interesting and all her students like her.
She does all the housework for the can cook delicious food.
I love her very much.
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句4
My mother is a senior high school English teacher. Under standably， she wanted her daughter to pick up English early to give her an edge to later study， which I did not understand at the age of eight. I was so obsessed with fun and games that I hated to stay peacefully with all those strange phonetic symbols and odd words.
I wondered what pleasure Mother seemed to have found in teaching me A，B， C. Wasn't teaching at school tire some enough for her？ I went on strike， refusing to spell a single word no matter how tender or severe Mother tried to be with me. For the first time in my life， Mother beat me， imprinting on my mind. The physical pain was gone long， long ago. But I have finally come to understand how it pained my mother to beat me for my obstinacy and disobedience， and I ache at her pain.
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句5
Every morning,my mother often gets up at about 6:30,then she'll prepare breakfast for me.
At 8 o'clock,it's time for her to go to work,so she go to the office by bus.
And at about 6:00 in the evening,my mother comes back,she's so tired then,but she still cooks supper for us.
After everything is done she will go to bed for want to say:mom,you are the greatest!
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句6
My mother is a unit of a staff member, big eyes, cherry mouth, wearing a pair of glasses. My mother loves me, every time I make a request, my mother will promise.
Once again, we went to school, we are happily laughing, suddenly the clouds in the sky, it seems almost going to rain, and happened that I did not bring an umbrella, I am anxious to stomp, thinking: if my mother at that side Well, I seem to see a familiar figure, and then a closer look, ah! That is not a mother? At that time the school has been opened, I rushed out, rushed to my mother's arms, cried and said: "I hope You can come, you really come! "Mother said:" Yue Yue, as long as you happy, happily go to school, my mother at your side.
Mother, you can not buy anything to repay you, I can only use excellent results to repay you this great maternal love.
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句7
Im sorry to hear that youre not feeling well. I think you should have a rest. Maybe you should see a doctor. Dont be too tired and stressed out. Its bad for your health.
If you get stressed out or tired, you can listen to some Chinese songs. I think its good for your Putonghua. And you can make some Chinese friends. Chinese people are friendly. You should find a right way to learn Putonghua. I think your Putonghua will be better one day.
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句8
Everybody has a wish, but thry're all different. me, too, also have a wish. what is my wish, do you want to know? my wish is , i have that wish because . my wish might not be something that's great, but it's my wish. it's very important to me, no what have happened.
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句9
Today is mothers day. I got up early.
Just got up, first thing, I wear clothes, wash face, brush my teeth, eat, eat a meal, I comb over head, just pick up the phone to call my mother, my mother just got a call from the I, I said: “mom, happy mothers day!” The mother suddenly said: I didnt know it was mothers day. I said, actually, I didnt know it was mothers day, grandma told me. “Mom said, oh.
Then I said, “mom, can we get video? ” mom said: when I finish my meal, Ill go back to you video.” I said, ok. at that moment, grandma came back and said, today, I saw a shoe store in the street. It was 19 yuan. “My sister said, Im going to buy a pair of shoes.” grandma said, ok. When they got back, mom called and said, now you can do video. I said, ok. My mother and I went out and turned off the com*r and went under the building for 100 shuttlecocks.
How happy mothers day is!
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句10
The most important person in my life is a little special. He is a Japanese cartoon character named Conan.
When I was very young, I saw him on TV, and I was deeply attracted by has superb intelligence and strong reasoning and analysis inadvertently find things that people usually do not meticulousness and patience deserve my him, I also learned a lot of knowledge that I could not learn from example，Flower dew can remove the handwriting on supermarket tickets, movie tickets, courier bills, will keep our personal information from being known to in the dark, you can tell if there's a way ahead by the sound of the stone coming little things have been in my mind for a long time and can not be now, I still adore him very much. He is very important in my heart.
Conan is the most important person in my life
《My Mother》怎么写作文6—7句11
我的妈妈有一双大眼睛，红嘴唇，留着长长地头发，乌黑发亮。妈妈很疼我，也乐与助人。
My mother has a pair of big eyes, red lips, long hair, black and shiny. My mother loves me and is happy to help others.
有一次，我正和伙伴玩耍，玩老鹰捉小鸡。正当我们玩的高兴时，我不小心摔了一下，出了一点血。这是妈妈急忙跑过来，把我抱到医院，医生说我没事，妈妈才放下心。
Once, I was playing with my partner, playing with eagles and chickens. Just when we had a good time, I accidentally fell and gave a little blood. This is my mother rushed over and carried me to the hospital. The doctor said I was ok, so my mother let go.
还有一次，妈妈的同事抱着一大堆东西往家走，妈妈见了就帮哪位阿姨拿几个东西。阿姨说：“谢谢。”
Another time, my mother's colleagues went home with a lot of things in their arms. When my mother saw her, she helped her aunt with a few things. "Thank you," said the aunt.
我喜欢我的妈妈。
I like my mother.
